i have now finished my script and can now start working on my storyboarding.

Decommissioned

SCENE 1

DAY – EXT – PHONE BOOTH

JACK is inside the phone booth. JACK inserts money into the phone and dials a number.

     JACK – I know who you are and I know its you who is poisoning this town and I am 

not going to rest until your corrupt body lies dead in the gutter where it belongs.

JACK slams the phone down and storms out the phone booth once he leaves the booth. He drops his police badge on the floor once he is out the phone booth.

SCENE 2

DAY – INT – POLICE STATION

Police chief WILSON is sat on his chair in his office. Officers TYLER and DAVID are also stood in the room with him.

     WILSON – How are operations going?

     TYLER – We might have a slight problem with one of the officers sir.

     WILSON – What! Who is it!

     DAVID – Its jack sir, it’s just he’s incorruptible.

     WILSON – he must be eliminated.

SCENE 3

DAY - EXT – ALLEY

There is a dark alley way in this alley a shifty looking man is stood with his hands in his pockets lent up against a wall. JACK walks casually to dealer and pushes him against the wall.

DEALER – What are you doing man?

JACK – I know you work for him

DEALER – I don’t know what your talking about man

JACK – don’t play dumb with me boy I know you work for him (pause) I know this is all linked the murders the drugs the chief!

SCENE 4

INT – DAY – POLICE STATION

The police chief WILSON and JACK are sat in WILSON’s office

   

WILSON – jack your conduct of late has not been acceptable.

JACK – are you being serious?

 WILSON – we can’t have you going around shaking down suspects with a gun jack

JACK slams his gun on the table and storms out slamming the door on his way.

SCENE 5

EXT – DAY – ALLEYWAY

There is a man stood in the alley way waiting for someone. JACK walks over to him and hands him money and the GUN DEALER hands JACK a gun and they both walk off in different directions.

SCENE 6

Two men are stood in an alley way TYLER who is not able to be identified and BUYER. JACK walks round the corner jack sees that TYLER and BUYER are in the middle of a drug deal.

JACK – Freeze

TYLER and BUYER both run away in different directions JACK follows TYLER not knowing who he is

JACK – Stop or I will shoot

TYLER does not stop and jack draws his gun and shots and walks over to TYLER’s body

SCENE 7

INT – DAY – POLICE STATION

WILSON and DAVID are in the office

WILSON – Jack must be eliminated, he could blow this whole operation.

SCENE 6 (CONT)

EXT – DAY – FIELD

JACK is standing over TYLER’s body he recognises who it is

JACK – Tyler.

SCENE 8

EXT – DAY – BACK ALLEY

JACK is surrounded by police officers all aiming at him and JACK has his hands in the air.